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Cheekychipmunk
Advanced Spanko
Username: Cheekychipmunk
Post Number: 134
Registered: 05-2006
| | Posted on Wednesday, June 21, 2006 - 10:08 pm: | 
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Its not my best but maybe someone will get a laugh out of it.
Anne was looking very much forward to the upcoming vacation. She and Neal had decided to go on vacation and since they were so close to their family members some of them would be going also. This would be their second trip to The Smokey Mountains and visiting Dolly-Wood. It is a real nice amusement park with several things for everyone.
Two of Neal’s brothers, (Jake and Jonathan) were going both were in their late forties and single (one divorced, one bachelor for life). Also going would be Neal’s mom, (Janie) and Anne’s parents, (Wayne and Lisa). Being ever so respectful of their parents, the trip to Dolly-Wood would be planned around the parents. To make sure they had an enjoyable trip. Anne wasn’t too concerned cause Jake (divorced) would be able to ride the rides with her. Neal couldn’t due to stomach problems, Jonathan thought himself too old to ride, Lisa never liked rides so she wasn’t about to start at 55 years of age and Wayne and Janie had health problems which kept them from riding and being jarred all around.
A week before the group was to leave, Jake and his ex-wife decided to get back together. They had been divorced for 1 1/2 years and still had a decent relationship and it would do the children good for them to be able to work out their differences and be a family again.
Anne was happy for them, except there went her riding partner. The last year they had went on vacation they had rode just about every ride Dolly-Wood had to offer. For the week before she kept telling herself she would still enjoy the trip. Some of the rides weren’t too bad and she could probably talk Jonathan into going on a couple of them. So maybe things would work out.
Upon arriving at Pigeon Forge Tennessee, the group got their rooms and the next morning after breakfast set off for Dolly-Wood. It was fun to watch their parent’s eyes light up like children’s eyes when they first laid eyes on the beautiful flower arrangements, which made shapes of butterflies to the entranceway of the park. Once inside everyone received a map and the group as a whole took off exploring the park. Everyone looked around the Jukebox Junction reliving the fabulous 50’s, Dolly Pardon museum, the Grist Mill and of course the Mine. There were a few rides in the Jukebox Junction but the most important one for Anne was Thunder Road. A turbo-ride action adventure, which takes you on a high speed Tennessee White Lightning chase with federal agents. Anne asked, “ Neal, how about riding this one with me. It isn’t that bad. You are sitting in Movie Theater, strapped into your seat and go from side to side with the high speed chase on the screen.”
“Nope. I’m not getting jerked around and wind up being sick the rest of the day.” Neal replied. *Wishing like hell that Jake had been able to come along. He knew Anne was going to be miserable. She liked riding but not by her, it had to be with someone she knew. *
“Fine!” Anne stated as she stalked off to ask Jonathan. “Sorry, just don’t think my heart would handle it.” Jonathan replied.
“Your heart? You don’t have any heart problems, Jake is only a year younger than you and none of the rides we rode last year killed him. There not that bad.”
“Sorry, but the only thing I will ride is the Ferris wheel.” Jonathan replied.
*Anne squeezing her hands into fists stalks off to look at another attraction. Thinking of all the fun she was missing. While walking around looking at everything each section has to offer, making wise-ass remarks about Jonathan and Neal not riding any rides with her. *
After watching several master craftsmen do their thing. Everyone decided to go to the General Store for refreshments. While everyone else was inside the store, Anne sat outside on a corner of the steps, sulking. All through the park workers dressed like in costumes from the past comes up and chats with anyone and everyone. One gentleman with a suit on, and a hat with dozens and dozens of small buttons and hatpins on it. He comes walking up to the General Store and asking how everyone is and are they enjoying their visit. *Anne sitting with a scowl on her face, her posture one of pure madness. *
“Well, how are we enjoying our trip to Dolly-Wood today”, ask the gentleman of Anne.
*Anne snaps her head up to see him better and shoots daggers through him * replying, “Not one bit!”
The gentleman thinking this young lady is in need of a tanning, and if it weren’t for wedding ring on her finger and the burly looking guy that is standing just a few feet from her *Anne not knowing Neal is standing behind her. * He would be glad to give her the comeuppance she deserves. The gentleman *Nodding his head* wishes her a good day.
*Taking a good grasp of Anne’s upper arm, Neal gently pulls her so she is standing on the step directly below him. Anne eyes wide with surprise *
“What are you doing? You could give someone a heart attack sneaking up on him or her like that!” she declares to Neal. *Wanting nothing more than to shake the childishness out of Anne. He lowers his head to whisper in her ear* “Debating on whether or not to blister your behind right here and now.”
*To anyone passing by this would look like two lovers whispering sweet nothings to each other. *
Anne fearing embarrassment, eyes wide with weariness, whispers, “ No… Please!”
Neal smirking *Anne can’t see his face, all she can see is the background over his shoulder and feel his lips, breath and beard lightly on her ear. * “Okay. But anymore rudeness to anyone and you’ll be sitting on pillows the rest of this vacation.”
The rest of the group exit’s the General Store all chatting about their purchases and what is next to be seen.
*Anne’s goodness lasts about 20 minutes. *
“Neal, I’m going right over the hill to some rides. I ride by myself since no one else will ride with me.” Anne states and turns to go uphill. * Neal grabs hold of her arm and tells her, “Not by yourself you aren’t.” *Anne sighs a deep sigh and attempts to twist out of his grip* “Look! You don’t want to ride, Jonathan will only ride the Ferris wheel and that is later this afternoon. Ya’ll can look around here. I’m not that far away. I’m a big girl not a kid. This isn’t the busy season here so nothing will happen.”
Neal unrelenting, “ Nope. Not by yourself. Let everyone look here and then we will go and you can ride.” *Anne stomps her foot, goes to the nearest bench and sits down, sulking. Thinking, everybody can just go to hell.
Neal shakes his head, heads toward Anne and sits down on the bench next to her. “Look yourself! I’m tired of this attitude. I know you like to ride with someone you know. You know rides will make me sick, yet you still get mad at me and ask me to be sick the rest of the day just to please you. I’m not going to do it.”
Anne fuming, “First, I’m not asking you to ride something that is going to make you sick. I’m asking you to ride a simple ride with me. The ones that are over that hill are easy rides. Surely you won’t get sick on those.”
“Such as?” Neal asks.
“There is one ride that is so easy that you don’t even get strapped in on it. You are on a boat, on a track, and it takes you through a darkened mine. Pirates and stuff like that illuminates your way through the mine.”
*Neal thinking, Hmm not many people here today, being that easy of a ride most likely won’t be a line or many people. Might be a good place to teach Anne a lesson on attitude. *
Neal relents. Telling the others that they are going to another section while everyone else finishes looking at this one.
Anne happy as can be takes Neal’s hand in hers. Not expecting what is going to happen.
Arriving at the spoke about ride, Neal notices that no one is line and the attendant looks as bored as Anne has been.
The attendant gets them settled, while Neal asks him, “ How long is this ride?” The attendant replies,” If you would like I can make the ride slower since they are two lovebirds and no one else is around.” *Neal nods his head in approval and Anne snuggles closer to Neal’s side. Neal mentions it would be better if they scooted over in the center of the seat. Anne scoots over not suspecting a thing. *
After entering the darkened mine and the boat moving ever so slowly, Neal gives Anne a slight tug, which pulls her over his lap. *Anne shocked, squeals*, asking Neal, “What are you doing?”
Neal holding Anne down with one hand, threatening “Don’t you dare fight it? You have been asking for this all day.“ rubbing Anne’s short clad bottom.
Spank on top of spank rains down on her cheeks, from top to bottom on each side and down the center. *Neal giving Anne a lecture on her attitude and what disappointed him the most with it.Being rude to a complete stranger.* Anne trying not to wiggle or squirm, answers, “Yes, Sir. Sorry Sir.”
"This is only a sampling of what you will recieve in our room if your attitude does not change. And *swat swat swat swat* if we see that gentleman again, you will apologize *swat swat swat swat*. Do *swat* you *swat* understand? *swat*
*Neal sees the exit light flashing sits Anne next to him and hugs her tightly to him, with her face buried in the material of his shirt. The attendant grinning widely, thinking something else had gone on, holds the boat still as they exit. *
While walking back to join the group Neal notices the carousel and asks, “Would you like to ride the carousel?”
Anne happily agrees jokingly saying, “ At least you won’t have the privacy to spank me again.”
*Neal raises his eyebrow replying, “You sure about that? We could get in one of the carts that have high sides.”
“You wouldn’t?” she asks, knowing good and well that he probably would.
“Hmm, wonder what other rides there are that are good for giving spankings?” Neal asks Anne.
*Anne jumps up on the carousel finds a unicorn and gingerly sits down on the saddle. Looking over her shoulder at her ever-loving husband stuck riding a swan. Laughing and sticking her tongue out, Anne figures Neal was right and if she had a little more patience then she would have enjoyed the whole day at the park and not had to endure a spanking to do so. *
"Success in almost any field depends more on energy and drive than it does on intelligence."
Sloan Wilson
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Weasel
Spanko
Username: Weasel
Post Number: 62
Registered: 06-2006
| | Posted on Thursday, June 22, 2006 - 10:34 am: |
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She got him to go on a ride with her, and} she got a spanking too! What a lucky girl, even if she didn't seem to think so!
Some day you'll spank me... er thank me for this!
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Tammynx
Moderator/Spanking Aficionado
Username: Tammynx
Post Number: 783
Registered: 10-2005
| | Posted on Thursday, June 22, 2006 - 11:24 am: |
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Good story Cheeky!!! |
Ma_vie_en_rose
Spanko
Username: Ma_vie_en_rose
Post Number: 192
Registered: 01-2006
| | Posted on Tuesday, August 01, 2006 - 08:02 pm: |
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Hell, If I only knew THAT facet of Dollywood, maybe I'd go up there a bit more :D |
Blistering_blonde
Advanced Spanko
Username: Blistering_blonde
Post Number: 357
Registered: 10-2005
| | Posted on Tuesday, August 01, 2006 - 09:23 pm: |
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LOL it was a great story ...thanks for shareing
He asked what I needed , timidly gave it at first, now he just knows.
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Pinkcheeks
Supreme Spanko
Username: Pinkcheeks
Post Number: 750
Registered: 12-2005
| | Posted on Thursday, August 17, 2006 - 03:44 pm: |
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 ..good job!
"Do I have to be good ALL the time?"
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Buenaventura
Advanced Spanko
Username: Buenaventura
Post Number: 124
Registered: 04-2006
| | Posted on Thursday, August 17, 2006 - 05:01 pm: |
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hey Pinky love the new picture! |
Pinkcheeks
Supreme Spanko
Username: Pinkcheeks
Post Number: 751
Registered: 12-2005
| | Posted on Thursday, August 17, 2006 - 06:14 pm: |
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ooohh thank you for noticing Buenaventura !
*I thought it would be nice to change~~~
"Do I have to be good ALL the time?"
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Pinkcheeks
Supreme Spanko
Username: Pinkcheeks
Post Number: 752
Registered: 12-2005
| | Posted on Thursday, August 17, 2006 - 06:17 pm: |
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sorry Cheeky...didnt mean to 
 ...hehehe
"Do I have to be good ALL the time?"
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Cheekychipmunk
Advanced Spanko
Username: Cheekychipmunk
Post Number: 140
Registered: 05-2006
| | Posted on Friday, August 18, 2006 - 02:19 pm: |
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That okay, Pinky. Like the new pic also.
"Success in almost any field depends more on energy and drive than it does on intelligence."
Sloan Wilson
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Buenaventura
Advanced Spanko
Username: Buenaventura
Post Number: 127
Registered: 04-2006
| | Posted on Friday, August 18, 2006 - 03:14 pm: |
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My fault sorry!! |
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