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Badgirl
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Username: Badgirl
Post Number: 38
Registered: 11-2005
| | Posted on Thursday, November 17, 2005 - 05:47 pm: | 
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I haven't gotten much response apart from Ziggy (thanks babe!) but here's part 2 anyhow. Please tell me what you think... or at least that you've read it. An artist craves fans you know
Part 2
And if it was going to be so arduous, it was best to ensure that she understood exactly who was in control, right from the very beginning.
“You like these tinted windows, do you?”
She nodded softly, think of all the fun we could have in here, with no one knowing. Why I bet he could go down on me right here, with all these cars driving by, and none would even slow down. I bet we could find ourselves completely naked in here, and no one else would. Szymbal had always been a closet exhibitionist, a fact she well knew. The idea of someone seeing her intimately had always been a great turn on. She had never followed through on it however; it always seemed too risky. Here though, here she could have it both ways. She started to smile.
“Yeah, baby, I like them a lot.”
SMACK! Her eyes widened in astonishment. “First off, you do not get to address me as baby – ever” SMACK! “Do you understand?” His voice was cool and even. SMACK! “Answer me, and do NOT – SMACK!- make me wait”
“OK, yeah, I get it. Sorry I didn’t realize – are there any other pet names I should avoid?” Her voice sounded hurt and bewildered again. Derek shook his head. Could she honestly be this clueless, or was she just egging him on? He wasn’t sure, but decided to let this one slide. He would explain the rules later. Right now, there was only one lesson he wanted her to learn: Captain outranks stewardess. Even lovely blonde stewarded with positively perfect bosoms. He hardened thinking about her. One lesson at a time. Then, if he was successful in teaching her, well he would deserve a reward, by his own standards.
“You like these tinted windows because you feel that they give you some sense of privacy right?” He didn’t wait for an answer. “Well, what if you realized that with a push of this button right here, they lose their tint?” He left his finger on the button. “Would you feel quite so secure then?” It was important that she lose her cool. She was too calm, too self-assured to be able to learn right now. He needed to break through that barrier. And while he hated scaring her, it was an effective means to an end. Hmmm, her end. Swat! Swat! To be fair, those were just for his own personal amusement. Not that she really seemed to notice, her eyes were as wide as saucers…
“Omigod! You wouldn’t dare. You’re sick you know that?”
SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! 5 hard full-handed spanks landed on her sitting-spot in rapid succession. “Not only would I dare, but if you are not careful young lady, you are going to find yourself bent over the roof of this car, receiving the same treatment.” SMACK! “Watch your language.” SLAP! “Watch your tone.” SLAP! “If I have to repeat myself on this, we will both be very unhappy. Do I make myself clear, child?”
Szymbal bristled at the tone, at the intent and at the word –CHILD – but she kept her mouth shut. Somehow she didn’t doubt that he would press that button, or even keep his promise about the top of his car. Which could be fun out in the country, but didn’t appeal to her right now on this highway. Besides which, her butt was really starting to burn from all of his spanking, and self-preservation made her realize it was not over yet. And with those large meaty hands, he could inflict some serious damage if he wanted to do so.
Derek smiled, as he watched the battle of wills play out across her face. He realized how hard this was for her, and gave her a moment. As she seemed to be coming to the right conclusion, he gave her bottom, which was by now a nice healthy shade of pink a soft rub of encouragement. He smiled even more, when he felt her relax into the palm of his hand. They just needed a little more time to build up some trust, and this could work out quite well indeed. He would even let her get away with not having answered him immediately, although she would answer … yes … she would.
“Szymbal, baby, do you understand?” He raised his hand, knowing that he was deliberately taunting her by using the same word he had forbidden her to use.
“Yes, yes…. I understand. Watch my tone. Watch my language.”
“Yes, what Szymbal?” His hand was still poised threateningly
“Yes, sir?” she answered hesitantly.
“VERY good.” He lowered his hand in a gentle tap. “We’re starting to get somewhere. I’m very proud of you.” He patted her bottom a little more. “You’ll see, Szymbal, once you start to follow the rules again, it will get easier. It’s human nature. And I’m going to help you with that as much as I can.”
With that he released her arms from behind her back and buckled himself again. Leaving one hand resting gently on her bottom, teasing her with soft gentle circles of his fingers over where both her thighs and cheeks met up, he started the car. He could feel the heat and wetness building between her legs, and almost doubted his ability to drive. MAN! He wanted her so bad that he ached. But for the moment, neither of them had earned that reward. He cleared his head as he felt her start to squirm again under his hand.
“Why don’t you just lie like that the rest of the way to the hotel, before trying to sit up. I promise to get you there safely. You can trust me. And Szymbal, that wasn’t a suggestion.”
“Yes, sir!” She moaned as she arched herself towards his hand. “ Anything you say, sir.” |
Make_me
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Username: Make_me
Post Number: 28
Registered: 09-2005
| | Posted on Friday, November 18, 2005 - 02:37 am: |
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Badgirl, really enjoying the story. Sorry i haven't posted earlier.
Cant wait for the rest.
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Poofette
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Username: Poofette
Post Number: 24
Registered: 10-2005
| | Posted on Friday, November 18, 2005 - 03:17 am: |
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I work at an airport.....most pilots are turds, but so far I like the story anyways!
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Ziggy
Advanced Spanko
Username: Ziggy
Post Number: 1155
Registered: 08-2005
| | Posted on Friday, November 18, 2005 - 04:38 am: |
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  flying will have a whole new meaning to me badgirl. great story !!
is there a part 3 ? I hope
when caught run faster then him !!
I am a TA junkie !!
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Pagan
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Username: Pagan
Post Number: 282
Registered: 05-2005
| | Posted on Friday, November 18, 2005 - 02:14 pm: |
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Hi Badgirl,
I'm not really into punishment/training, but I can't let a plea for feedback go unanswered. 
For me, this kind of controlling behaviour would make the hair stand up on the back of my neck...but I assume Szymbal enjoys it? |
Badgirl
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Username: Badgirl
Post Number: 47
Registered: 11-2005
| | Posted on Friday, November 18, 2005 - 05:26 pm: |
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To be honest Pagan, she doesn't seem to know yet. As such neither do I... She's caught in a bit of a predicament you see, she likes him well enough when he's not spanking her, and so far he hasn't actually hurt her, or done anything beyond what she thinks of as "kinky". Not to mention the whole job thing of course.
I'm trying to let this roll out as it will, and I am having some difficulty figuring out where it goes next. Some of that ambiguity is probably bcz I don't know where I stand on the issue yet.
So mostly, I'm just letting the characters do what they want. I will only intervene if I feel it absolutely necessary.
I guess we will both just have to wait and see how it turns out.
And to everyone else, thanks for reading and letting me know. There's no joy in posting stories that you think no one is reading.... |
Pagan
Spanko
Username: Pagan
Post Number: 283
Registered: 05-2005
| | Posted on Friday, November 18, 2005 - 05:49 pm: |
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quote:There's no joy in posting stories that you think no one is reading....
No, there isn't. But I've given up that fight.  |
Badgirl
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Username: Badgirl
Post Number: 49
Registered: 11-2005
| | Posted on Friday, November 18, 2005 - 05:53 pm: |
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you're absolutely right pagan, and have i told u recently just how much i love your stuff? I think i read it all in less than 2 weeks. Want more -- need more....  |
Kittenkatina
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Username: Kittenkatina
Post Number: 8
Registered: 10-2005
| | Posted on Friday, November 18, 2005 - 08:51 pm: |
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i like where this is going...more please! |
Katy_spankwish
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Username: Katy_spankwish
Post Number: 7
Registered: 05-2005
| | Posted on Wednesday, December 07, 2005 - 10:39 am: |
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Keep writing. I have learned over the years that readers are a a fickle lot. Somtimes they post on everything. Sometimes they wait until a story is finished.
Someone needs to remind the Captain that this IS NOT the military. |
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