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Redhinney
Spanko Username: Redhinney
Post Number: 234 Registered: 10-2005
| Posted on Tuesday, February 14, 2006 - 08:15 pm: |
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Chapter 3 by Patricia Louise@2004 This chapter has a very different ending than some of you might think. I hope you enjoy this. I thought that the neding would be nice on Valentine's day. Happy Cupid to all. _________________________________________________ Shawn sits on the couch, TV on but not watching it or even listening, he is staring directly at his wife but not really looking, thinking about how did all this happen? Meanwhile, Maddy is trying hard not to cry but is so unsuccessful that she fears that Shawn’s anger will increase with even sound. Finally after what seems like hours Maddy stops. She leans on the wall trying to make sense of last night and the events of today. How did it happen that she is once again in the corner with her red sore butt sticking out? She is determine to get thru whatever punishment Shawn thinks is needed but how she is going to do that she doesn’t know. Somewhere along the way, Maddy finds herself going into herself. Once there she can block all pain and just go thru the motions. It has been a long time since she did this. The last time was so very painful that she swore that she would never visit that part of her mind again. But if this was what was needed to get thru today; she would do it. Shawn is watching Maddy very attentively, noticing her every breath. He is aware of every change in her body language no matter how small. No knowing where she has allowed her mind to drift to, he just sits and watches. “Come here Maddy.” Maddy slowly, turns and ask timidly “do want to you spank me here or upstairs?” Her voice is flat and her body seems to hanging in midair as if waiting for the next tidal wave to come. “No not now I thought that you might like to freshen up a bit.” “I need to go to the bathroom can I use the bathroom upstairs?” Shawn shakes his head and watches as Maddy walks up the stairs. Never in 15 years of marriage and countless number of times that he spanked her did she ask permission to use the bathroom, sure she went during spankings, but she has never asked in that tone, that dull tone as if she has given up. What is happening?’ When Maddy comes down she is dressed exactly the way she went up – only in her T shirt. Again Shawn thinks what is going on? She usually is much more modest; surely she knows I would never require that she stays undress. Shawn pats the couch “Come lay down for a while.” Maddy folds her body next to him, wrapping her arms around her chest, barely touching Shawn. She fell a sleep leaving a small gap between their bodies. After 1.5 hours Shawn wakes Maddy up. “Get up little one, what about lunch.” Without saying a word Maddy gets off the couch and heads into the kitchen. Tying an apron on, she goes about preparing grill veggies sandwiches and a salad of fresh greens. She finishes up just as Shawn walks in the door. With the food is on the table, both of them sat in their normal seats. Shawn tries to make small talk, asking questions but Maddy just gives a yes or no without any explanations, her head hanging down, her eyes looking at her feet. “Maddy, look at me!” Briefly she looks up but just as quickly looks away. In that brief moment, Shawn notices her eyes and expression are gazed over as if there is no one inside of her. He also is aware that she has not even taken one bit of her sandwich but lets that slide. He knows that making eating a point now is not a discussion he wants to start with her in this current frame of mind. To Maddy lunch seems to last for hours. Shawn offers to cleanup and still Maddy just sits waiting. “Take this in to the den, I’ll meet you there”, handing her a wooden spoon and the metal handle spatula. Without looking up Maddy takes what is offered knowing exactly what is going to happen. She puts the “tools” by Shawn’s chair and moves into the corner. Maddy wasn’t told to do this but she knows that in “normal” spankings Shawn always wants her waiting like this. Shawn walks into the room takes a deep breath and lets out a sigh. Again he thinks exactly what is happening? “Come here little one” Without a word Maddy walks towards Shawn and places herself over his knee. Shawn holds her in place with his arm and puts his legs over hers and stops. He thinks; the last time she was this despondent was after the last miscarriage and that was a long hard trip home. During that period she shut out the world, not allowing herself to even experience joy. Nope there is no way that can happen again. Spanking her is one thing but breaking her sprite just isn’t the way it is suppose to be. “Get up Maddy, we are done. There will be no more spankings today. Come here let me hold you.” Maddy sits next to Shawn leans into his body as if to absorb all his body heat allowing him to put his arms around her. Neither of them says word. Shawn just rubs Maddy’s arm trying to figure out what has happened and how he can get his wife back. His wife; red hair and temper, that’s exactly what he wants, the little fireball that will fight tooth and nail for her family, that’s what he wants. His wife who wears her heart on her sleeve and will defend anyone or anything she loves until the day she dies, that’s what he wants no matter what he has to do to get it. “Maddy, I am sorry please forgive me. I was so concern about my authority that I lost sight of the real reason we are what we are. Please don’t shut me out I need you more than you can ever think possible. I was wrong it’s just that you know how much I hate anyone drinking and I worry about you health all the time. Please know that I love you and the thought of not having you is more than I can ever bare. I am sorry. Please forgive me. Don’t do this, please be that impulsive Maddy I love so.” Shawn gives Maddy one of those kisses that last forever, the kind that not only leave you breathless but erases anything but pure love from your memory. The rest of the evening finds Maddy and Shawn in each others arms celebrating not only their deep commitment and love for each other but Maddy’s promotion as the first non CPA principle. The next morning Maddy gets up allowing Shawn to sleep in. She arrives to her new office early to find 3 dozen of the most beautiful white rose with a card that read” I knew you would do it. You have always been on top. I love you.” Love can't always be seen or heard but will always be felt with your heart
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Ma_vie_en_rose
New member Username: Ma_vie_en_rose
Post Number: 45 Registered: 01-2006
| Posted on Wednesday, February 15, 2006 - 06:05 pm: |
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Aw.. admittedly it's not what I guess people were waiting for, but I think it's a lovely ending <3 good job. |
Redhinney
Spanko Username: Redhinney
Post Number: 244 Registered: 10-2005
| Posted on Wednesday, February 15, 2006 - 08:34 pm: |
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NMavie, you re new to the Den but the Shawn and Maddy stories are based on the true live o two of my favorite people my husband and myself so I can't be spanked hard all the time. Love can't always be seen or heard but will always be felt with your heart
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Ma_vie_en_rose
New member Username: Ma_vie_en_rose
Post Number: 48 Registered: 01-2006
| Posted on Wednesday, February 15, 2006 - 09:20 pm: |
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Well... you know. The true greats suffer for their art ^_~. Nah, I kid. I figured it might have been something like that, and I had kind of picked up things from some of your other posts and the comments before the Shawn and Maddy stories which I've read. But I meant nothing negative by it, I love your stories, you have such a grasp of your characters and their motivations, the situations are very real and your prose is lovely. I think the final chapter of this was quite effectively done. :D! So does that mean you really threw a glass of water on that one bitch? If so, totally five points right there <3 |
Redhinney
Spanko Username: Redhinney
Post Number: 245 Registered: 10-2005
| Posted on Wednesday, February 15, 2006 - 10:51 pm: |
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Yes I did much to my husband's displeasure Love can't always be seen or heard but will always be felt with your heart
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