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Butterfly84
Junior Spanko
Username: Butterfly84
Post Number: 51
Registered: 05-2006
| | Posted on Wednesday, May 31, 2006 - 11:01 pm: | 
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(Author's note: I don't usually write like this, and this is the first time I've let anyone read my work. So, feel priveleged and enjoy  )
I am standing at the sink with my arms immersed in soapy water, humming to myself as I clean the dishes I used to make dinner this evening. He slips his arms around me from the back and nuzzles my neck. "Have you been good today?" he whispers, in that warning tone he uses that lets me know he wants to play. I feel a shiver race down my spine at his words. "Yes, sir" I answer softly, turning my head to meet his lips. "You're sure about that?" he asks, cupping my bottom gently. Whenever he does that I cannot help but feel that he's sending me a message. "You're mine" this message says, and it causes my skin to flush and heat to pool in my lower belly every time. To know that I belong to him is a beautiful gift. Knowing that he wants to play, I "accidentally" drop an old coffee mug on the floor and it shatters. There is a soft growl behind me as he squeezes my backside, just enough the make me yelp a little. "Tsk tsk," he says," haven't we discussed this clumsiness young lady?" The heat begins to grow and I can feel my breathing becoming more shallow. "Y-yes sir, I'm sorry, I'll clean it up," I stammer. He sighs and I resist the urge to beg him to make love to me right then. I know he wants to make this last and he will. "You'll clean it up when we're done, young lady," he informs me, his voice gravelly with a need I mirror in my body and soul.
With that proclamation, he leads me to the dining room table where he pulls out a chair and sits down. Gently, he guides me across his lap and rests his hand on my bottom. Lovingly, he begins to rub circles around my backside, building the anticipation of what is to come. He lifts my skirt and I can feel him chuckle slightly as he discovers I'm not wearing any panties. The blood is roaring through my head, creating a haze around my mind that is broken as soon as his hand connects sharply with my bare bottom. I gasp as I jerk slightly, the quick pain mixing deliciously with the pleasure he has already built. He rubs the spot he has just assaulted, enough to make the pain dull slightly and for me to let my guard down. As soon as I relax, the next blow lands. This erotic dance continues so long I lose all sense of time. Suddenly, the pace changes and his hand falls faster on my backside. Now there is no stopping to dull the pain and the warmth builds, both in my bottom and the place I so desperately want him to touch. When he stops, I can barely think through the need. He begins rubbing in circles again, each time dipping closer to where I'm dripping with need for him. "Are you going to behave little girl?" he asks, and his voice tells me that he wants me as much as I do him. "Yes, sir" I manage. "Good," he replies, and finally he dips his finger inside of me. On a sob, I push myself against his hand, seeking the release that has thus far eluded me. Slowly, he caresses me, building the fire to a roaring flame. As I writhe against his hand, he keeps his pace steady, just steady enough to keep on the edge of climax. I abandon any sense of dignity as I beg him for release. "Please make love to me, sir, I need to feel you inside of me," I sob. He hesitates for a moment before withdrawing his finger. Suddenly I'm in his arms as he strides to our bedroom. Carefully, he lays me on the bed and undresses quickly before coming to cover me. My bottom pushes into the bed, re-igniting the fire there as he presses himself into me. I gasp as I feel him inside of me, touching me, it seems, so deep he's touching my very soul. As I wrap my legs around him, he builds the pace, just enough to make us both frantic. I can tell when he loses his grip on his self control as he sinks his teeth into my neck and allows our dance to take on it's own rhythm. I scream as my body erupts in fiery pleasure and seconds later, I feel him climax inside of me. He collapses on top of me, breathing erratically. He gently kisses my lips and my heart turns slowly in my chest. After a few moments, he rolls off of me, onto the bed and gathers me to his side. Completely content, I curl into his side and we both drift off to sleep.
~*butterfly*~
Nobody suspects the butterfly...
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Butterfly84
Junior Spanko
Username: Butterfly84
Post Number: 52
Registered: 05-2006
| | Posted on Wednesday, May 31, 2006 - 11:02 pm: |
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WOW, ok, I'm totally nervous to hear what you guys have to say...I'm new at this, and am going mostly on what I've read of other people's experiences, so...just remember that :-)
~*butterfly*~
Nobody suspects the butterfly...
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Eod
New member
Username: Eod
Post Number: 19
Registered: 10-2005
| | Posted on Thursday, June 01, 2006 - 12:09 am: |
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Excellent Butterfly. Very erotic. |
Paddledom
New member
Username: Paddledom
Post Number: 32
Registered: 05-2006
| | Posted on Thursday, June 01, 2006 - 01:17 am: |
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Very nice butterfly
*HUGS* very well written
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Tammynx
Moderator/Spanking Aficionado
Username: Tammynx
Post Number: 606
Registered: 10-2005
| | Posted on Thursday, June 01, 2006 - 08:26 am: |
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Great job Butterfly!!!! |
Victoria_wood
Spanko
Username: Victoria_wood
Post Number: 157
Registered: 04-2006
| | Posted on Thursday, June 01, 2006 - 09:02 am: |
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Nice story.
Cheers,
Victoria
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Blistering_blonde
Spanko
Username: Blistering_blonde
Post Number: 145
Registered: 10-2005
| | Posted on Thursday, June 01, 2006 - 01:59 pm: |
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loved the story ...keep them coming
A HOT RED butt is the sign of LOVE and trust
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Buenaventura
Junior Spanko
Username: Buenaventura
Post Number: 57
Registered: 04-2006
| | Posted on Thursday, June 01, 2006 - 03:06 pm: |
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Good story Butterfly.Wish I cought write like that. |
Butterfly84
Junior Spanko
Username: Butterfly84
Post Number: 57
Registered: 05-2006
| | Posted on Thursday, June 01, 2006 - 07:56 pm: |
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Awww thanks guys! I'll have to dig around and see what I have hidden around the house, story-wise
~*butterfly*~
Nobody suspects the butterfly...
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Cheekychipmunk
Junior Spanko
Username: Cheekychipmunk
Post Number: 95
Registered: 05-2006
| | Posted on Thursday, June 01, 2006 - 09:23 pm: |
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Butterfly,
Great story. You are very talented writer. Looking forward to more of your stories.
"Success in almost any field depends more on energy and drive than it does on intelligence."
Sloan Wilson
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Pinkcheeks
Spanko
Username: Pinkcheeks
Post Number: 477
Registered: 12-2005
| | Posted on Friday, June 02, 2006 - 08:44 am: |
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 well done........
"Thought I WAS being a good girl...really I did!"
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Bluepencil
Junior Spanko
Username: Bluepencil
Post Number: 51
Registered: 04-2005
| | Posted on Friday, June 02, 2006 - 09:41 am: |
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Good story, but what about the rest of the dishes in the sink??? |
Butterfly84
Junior Spanko
Username: Butterfly84
Post Number: 59
Registered: 05-2006
| | Posted on Friday, June 02, 2006 - 09:37 pm: |
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I feel a sequel coming on...
~*butterfly*~
Nobody suspects the butterfly...
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Paddledom
New member
Username: Paddledom
Post Number: 34
Registered: 05-2006
| | Posted on Saturday, June 03, 2006 - 12:07 am: |
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hmm interesting butterfly - of course I have some thoughts on what I want to see in the sequel :P
Looking forward to reading it |
Butterfly84
Junior Spanko
Username: Butterfly84
Post Number: 64
Registered: 05-2006
| | Posted on Saturday, June 03, 2006 - 12:27 am: |
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Hey, suggestions are ALWAYS welcome! Sometimes the hardest part is getting an idea. From there it's usually pretty easy for me!
~*butterfly*~
Nobody suspects the butterfly...
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Czechchick
New member
Username: Czechchick
Post Number: 8
Registered: 05-2006
| | Posted on Tuesday, June 06, 2006 - 01:53 pm: |
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Butterfly, I liked your story so much that my boyfriend and I, after we read it together, decided to re-enact the scene ourselves!
We had a very lovely time, thank you! |
Butterfly84
Junior Spanko
Username: Butterfly84
Post Number: 72
Registered: 05-2006
| | Posted on Tuesday, June 06, 2006 - 09:45 pm: |
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Awww, czechchick, that's so sweet! I'm very flattered!
~*butterfly*~
Nobody suspects the butterfly...
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Bratgirl_2006
New member
Username: Bratgirl_2006
Post Number: 10
Registered: 06-2006
| | Posted on Friday, June 09, 2006 - 02:20 am: |
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WOW!!!!!! That was increadable!  Very intense! I will definitally look for that sequl! |
Weasel
New member
Username: Weasel
Post Number: 8
Registered: 06-2006
| | Posted on Monday, June 12, 2006 - 02:42 pm: |
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Super story! I can't wait to hear what happens when you are bent over cleaning up the mess from that busted cup! |
Janice
New member
Username: Janice
Post Number: 6
Registered: 06-2006
| | Posted on Friday, June 23, 2006 - 04:53 am: |
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Well written, very intense. Very poetic in a sense. |
Otklover
New member
Username: Otklover
Post Number: 1
Registered: 10-2006
| | Posted on Tuesday, October 03, 2006 - 11:29 pm: |
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very nice story} |
Tammynx
Moderator/Spanking Aficionado
Username: Tammynx
Post Number: 1315
Registered: 10-2005
| | Posted on Sunday, October 08, 2006 - 10:01 pm: |
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Butterfly we are waiting for another story!! |
Nd2bspankd
New member
Username: Nd2bspankd
Post Number: 24
Registered: 11-2006
| | Posted on Saturday, November 04, 2006 - 02:10 pm: |
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Butterfly, that was a wonderful story. Very erotic and romantic! 
Pink Bottom wishes.
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Straddlinnpaddlin
New member
Username: Straddlinnpaddlin
Post Number: 3
Registered: 11-2006
| | Posted on Monday, November 13, 2006 - 01:39 am: |
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Wow Butterfly, that was sexy, aggressive, romantic, sweet...a great combo for anyone. BIG turn on, thx. |
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