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Celticbratt
Junior Spanko Username: Celticbratt
Post Number: 140 Registered: 04-2005
| Posted on Saturday, July 01, 2006 - 06:44 am: |
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VERY VERY VERY GRAPHIC!!!!!!!Be kind all, please- this is my first post to the writing board. This is something I've sent to my Master, in hopes of bringing him some enjoyment.I hope it speaks to some of you? Himself is known for his ways of twisting subbies around to his will....I closed the door of the hotel room, knowing that for the next 24 hours, I was TOTALLY at Master's hand...whatever Himself wants,...I'll do. We are still working through the Dom/subbie stuff- Himself is so much farther than I in the lifestyle, but I'm in a happy little subbie place, knowing that Master spoils me, doesn't push my limits TOO far....Untill this night....The next 24 hours taught me an entirely new meaning of submission...made me scream, cry, writhe, beg, and otherwise debase myself in ways I never would have believed possible, all to escape the pain from HIS hand....but when the 24 hours was done...I know I was closer to my Dom than ever before....that I understood things I didn't know, felt closer to Him in ways I never would have believed. That is what is so amazing about living a Dom/sub relationship. The ONLY hard part of this relationship...it isn't taking the beatings, or dealing with whatever new torture He comes up with...It's sharing my heart and soul totally, and still feeling like I'm not serving him as well as I could....but that is a bit off topic.... We return to a very secluded hotel room- Just say, for the sake of literary freedom, that this is a room WELL seperated from the general populace...nothing G does to me will get called in to the police, no prying eyes/ears, ect.Master is totally free to do whatever he will for the next 24 hours. It's 5:34 PM...we have the room for a full day.The latch closes with a click...He turns to me, pulling me close, and snuggeling me into him. His left hand around my body, cradling me to him, his right hand moves up, stroking the side of my face, angling my mouth to his. His kiss starts light....easy....butterfly kisses on my lips, deepening slowly as his hand secures my hair, turning my face, as he kisses me long and deep-Soon I'm panting, pressing my breasts against his chest.OH...if he only could understand....how I value him as a MAN, how he makes me pant and whine, and WANT to debase myself at his feet, all to make Himself happy.But I can't put this into words...so I try my best to show him through my bodies reaction to him....One more soft kiss on my lips, then another on each eye, and lastly on my forehead- he knows what that does to me."My little Cunt" Master says to me.....I thrill to the pet name, knowing what it means...I CRAVE to be called Master's slut,bitch,piece- to be used at will...ahhhhh. The door is locked now, and I slide down His body, kneeling at the feet of the Man who I respect above all.I rub my face against his thigh, making it perfectly obvious what I'm offering....May I PLEASE take you into my mouth Sir????Hummmmmmmmmm...he reaches down to stroke the side of my face, adjusting his clothing so I can have what I'm asking for? I take Himself into my mouth, opening wide, but at the same time, trying to do it right...I run my tounge over the head of his gorgeous cock, licking and pumping....I don't HAVE one of those parts, so I don't know what feels good...but I SO want to make Himself happy....I feel his hand go to the back of my head, gripping my hair...ahhhhh obviously a good sign? Proof that subbie has does something right? Without warning, he forces my mouth down on him. I feel his cock scrape the back of my throat, and I fight the gag reflex....making sure I don't bite my love.....I try again to make him happy...I start sucking, stroking his dick with my tounge....desperate to make him happy...That's ALL that matters to me...subbie making Master happy.We move into a rhythem....I can tell the difference....Master has started to loose himself to the feelings, and I'm careful not to yank him out of that. I expect him to moan, stiffen,and grab ahold of my face/hair, as he cums, sending a load of his hot seamen down my throat.NOPE!!!!Master is obviously in the mood to play....ahhhhh. Just before he comes, I hear Master's stern admonishment..."DO NOT SWALLOW OR LOOSE ANY OF THAT, MY LITTLE BITCH!!!, hold int in your mouth..." Another few pumps, and Master groans as he throws his head back...I feel the rhythmic loosening of his cum, as it fills my mouth. I can taste him, and smell him, as I kneel at his feet. I'm an intelligent, decent looking woman, who is now kneeling in submission to the Man I consider my master...his cum filling my mouth.And I revel in it...Master stands above me, I look up to him. He holds out his hand, at face level-Whack- Himself backhands my face, fortunatly I still manage to hold him in my mouth....Himself holds his hand in front of my face......"You will release what is in your mouth into my hand now."...I lean forward, and open my mouth, transferring the contents of my mouth to his palm. I sit back on my heels, looking up at him-"Now my little CUNT, lean forward and lick Master's cum from his hand". I can only imagine what power you must be feeling right now, looking down at me hurrying to serve you....Damn I want to make you happy...I lean forward, open my mouth, and start to lick....you feel the tickle of my tounge against your palm, at the same time you feel the rush of domination.You look down at your little cunt, lapping your cum out of your hand, knowing I'll do ANYTHING to make you happy.That has to be SUCH a rush.....Oh Master I love you so....After I've licked you cum out, you feel my tounge rubbing against your palm and fingers.....I'll stay in position till you tell me otherwise..."Ok little bitch, kneel up and get into position" I immediatly put my hands on my thighs, spread my knees, and thrust out my chest....Master goes over to the bed to sit for a bit and recover. "Serve me" I hear him say...I've packed a picinic basket of food and drink for us, and I'm very conscious of my naked state as I serve you. I hand you a plate, kissing your wrist as I do so, and sit back in tower. Master takes a few bite, then reaches forward to offer his subbie a piece of meat...I look up at you, opening my mouth to take the food from your fingers.Our meal progresses...Himself feeding his little bitch, me showing my submission with each mouthfull...After our meal is done,Master sits back and looks at me, asseses me."Name the toys that I have to spank you with, my little bitch"His question catches me off guard, and I squirm to do well..."There is your hand Sir, that board with all the little hooks in it....the slapper you made , ummmmyour crop, two???three paddles left? (I strain to remember how many of those damn things we killed so far) The horrible bath brush I hate so....umm, umm,,,,,I look at you with a state of hopelessness..."SIR" please, I beg you...."Your two floggers....ummm,I"'m feeling frantic, because I know there are more, but the question and it;s implications have me so flustered..."OK little bitch....you did good". I sigh in relief, wanting only to make you happy."Lets go down the list...", he strokes my face and I worry...."I'm going to beat you with every impliment you mentioned." I whimper with this, and you chuckle.""I'm going to give you 5 strokes with each of the impliments you mentioned...on different parts of your body.You WILL hold position, or I'll immediatly increase it to 20." "Believe me little bitch, you don't want to disappoint me...." I assure him that I'll be his good girl, that I'll behave."Crawl over to the bag, my little cunt, and pull out all of the toys you mentioned.Lay them out on the desk, and crawl back to me...."There really isn't an elegant way of crawling, is what goes through my mind as I try to do what you tell me- I crawled over to your bag, opened it, and started reaching for your toys....Some I had to pick up with my hand, then transfer it to my mouth to bring to you, but you don't seem to mind...it's obvious I'm trying to please you. "Kneel up and present your breasts to me" I've already been ordered to hand you the crop with my teeth....I'm REALLY panicking now.I look down to see you holding one of my breasts in your hand....That sight is so damn visceral, it makes me gasp."OK- 5 my girl- two on each , then one REALLY bad one on both.If you yank out of position, it goes to 20 on your breasts..."I feel Master hold up one of my breasts, turning it so the nipple was in position to get the worst. I closed my eyes, waiting....WHACK!!!!!! liquid fire spread over my left breast. My nipple ached, but at once stood out and stiffened.Your fingers reach out and twist my skin, playing with my nipple e until I'm rocking my pelvis back and forth in fustration..."Only 4 more to go Baby" I feel Master cup my right breast, again pulling and tweaking my nipple until it's standing out, then he holds my breast up to his advantage...WHACK....I cry out and flinch....I look down and see two red lined, crossing my breasts, transversing my nipples which were now throbbing..."Good job cunt, two more coming-" I feel his hand cup my left breast...WHACK!!!! Up comes the right breast in his hand WHACK....By this time I'm scared...I don't think I can handle this...."Now my little bitch.....Arch up, stick those gorgeous titts out in the air, place your hands behind your neck, and DON'T MOVE!!!!" Being positioned like this is so hard, holding form for his strike. I close my eyes and wait for it.....arching my back out as much as I can,WHACK!!!!This stinging pain takes my breath away.......I struggle to keep my hands behind my neck, until it's obvious I was a good girl. I wrap my arms around myself, rocking and trying to make the pain go away.Himself reaches down to my cunt...feeling how wet it is already....You chuckle to yourself...thinking about what a LONG day I'm in for.It's only 634 pm |
Tplayer
Spanko Username: Tplayer
Post Number: 124 Registered: 05-2006
| Posted on Saturday, July 01, 2006 - 08:07 pm: |
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Beautifully felt and written Celticbrat. Looking forward to next hour! It's all a matter of perspective
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Tammynx
Moderator/Spanking Aficionado Username: Tammynx
Post Number: 831 Registered: 10-2005
| Posted on Sunday, July 02, 2006 - 03:33 pm: |
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good story!! |
Hunny
New member Username: Hunny
Post Number: 19 Registered: 06-2006
| Posted on Friday, August 04, 2006 - 01:02 am: |
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Wonderful and sexy but where is the rest? You can't just leave us hanging here! |
Nicenick06
Spanko Username: Nicenick06
Post Number: 119 Registered: 02-2006
| Posted on Friday, August 04, 2006 - 05:04 am: |
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Gorgeous. Nick |
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