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Beentoolong
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Username: Beentoolong
Post Number: 2
Registered: 03-2007
| | Posted on Thursday, May 17, 2007 - 01:44 am: | 
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Bear with me guys, this is the first time I've tried to write on this subject. I hope you enjoy, any constructive criticism is always appreciated!
'Stupid' was the only word running through Mickeys head on the long ride home from the casino. She looked over at Brad and tried to make small talk. 'how was she going to tell him that she lost $2000 dollars' The thought made her sick to her stomach. 'I have to tell him' she thought 'I can't hide that kind of money'
Mickey had begged Brad to take her to the casino that night. He knew how she could get so he wasn't exactly thrilled with the idea, but Mickey wore him down (as she usually did with her pouting). She had a habit of losing a couple hundred dollars every time, but she loved going. "I suppose we could afford a little fun" he told her, and off they were.
When they arrived at the casino, Brad handed Mickey $200 dollars. "When this is gone we go, understand?" he asked. Mickey nodded in agreement, anxious to get to the machines. "I'll be at the Blackjack tables" he told her. Brad wasn't much of a gambler, so he could play small hands of Blackjack all night and not spend much. Mickey headed to the slots.
She loved the slot machines, although they never really liked her much. Before she knew it, she was placing her last $20 bill into the machine. She looked at her watch, they had only been there a 1/2 hour! Mickey watched the machine eat her last $20 with no mercy. She started to get flushed. 'Brad will kill me if he finds out I lost that money so quick, its a 3 hour drive here!' A light bulb went off in Mickeys head, they had just received a brand new credit card in the mail! 'Perfect' she thought, 'I'll take out a small cash advance, win it back and Brad will never know!' }She headed over to the ATM machine, and before she knew it she was back in the game $200 more dollars in her pocket! The second $200 seemed to go faster than the first. Mickey could feel herself getting flushed and panic setting in, 'here it goes' she thought. A few hours later, 3 more trips to the ATM, 1 to the cashier, and a grand total of $2000 later Brad found Mickey at the machine. The look on her face must've said it enough. "Lost it all, huh" Brad said with a smile. "C'mon lets get out of here" Mickey followed Brad out of the casino. 'He wouldn't be smiling if he knew' she said to herself.
Now it was 2am and it was pouring rain. Mickey couldn't even look at Brad. She couldn't figure out how to tell him. He was always telling her she needed to be more careful with money. How could she have gone behind his back and taken that money. 'Stupid' rolled through her mind once again. 'He's gonna be pissed' she thought. She sat in silence trying to figure out a way to tell him.
"How much?" said Brad. "Huh?" Mickey answered, shocked. "It shows all over your face Mick, I'm gonna ask one more time, How much?" Mickey's stomach turned. Her mouth was dry. "$2000" she whispered. "What was that?" Brads voice was raising. "I can't hear you" Mickey burst into tears...She wept as she told him how much she lost and where she got it from. "I'm so sorry, I know it was stupid" Mickey cried "I just couldn't help myself" Brad was silent for what seemed like hours, but could've only been a few minutes. She had never seen him this mad. It was quiet and the rain was really coming down by now, Brad pulled to the side of the road. "What are you doing?" asked Mickey. "I need a minute" Brad replied, in a voice she had never heard directed at her. He opened the car door and stepped out. 'probably just needs some air' she thought, 'I'll give him a minute to cool off.' Suddenly the passenger side door opened, before she could utter a word she was outside the car. Brad holding her firmly under the arm. "What the hell are you doing?" cried Mickey. "It's pouring rain out here" "If you know what's good for you Michelle, you will not let another word come out of your mouth, It's time I teach you a lesson" Brad replied. He NEVER called her Michelle. Mickey saw him reach for his belt, and she decided to heed his warning.
Now up until this night, Brad and Mickey had experimented with spanking only in the bedroom. She would "play" the brat and he would take her over his knee and she loved it, but it had all been for fun. Secretly, she knew she needed more than that but had been too shy to ask for it.
"We are on a major highway, and it's pouring!" Mickey stumbled over her words. "I'm aware of that" Brad answered. "I'm not going to tell you again, I don't want to hear another word out of your mouth" Mickey was panicking 'He's not really going to do this here, is he?' She barely completed her thought, before she was turned around facing the car and her sweatpants and panties were being pulled to her ankles.
Mickeys heart raced, she tried to squirm and wiggle away, but at 5'3 120lbs she was no match for Brad at 6'2 220. The belt sounded like a sword, as it left the last loop. "Brad, please!" "Don't do this!" I'm sorry!" Mickey pleaded. Her cries fell on deaf ears. The first time the belt made contact with her now cold and wet rear end Mickey felt her knees buckle. She had never felt pain like that before. The strokes were short and fast after that. Brad scolded her with every one! "This has been a long time coming young lady, you have been pissing away our money for far too long!" he told her. "This is the last time! I'm prepared to whip your compulsive behavior right out of you. Do you understand me?" He asked. "Yes, sir" the words seemed to fall from her mouth naturally. She sobbed silently as her whipping continued. She knew she deserved it, she knew she needed it! He must've given her 20 strokes before he decided he was through. He turned her around to face him, and she buried his head into his chest and weeped. He didn't say a word, he didn't have to. Her bottom bare and red on the side of the highway, she had never felt so safe in her life.
They made love that night, like it was the first time. It was the beginning of a new chapter in their life, one Mickey was ready for! |
Buenaventura
Advanced Spanko
Username: Buenaventura
Post Number: 642
Registered: 04-2006
| | Posted on Thursday, May 17, 2007 - 07:38 am: |
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20 Ha!!That would just be the warm up!!!Good story sweetie.Loved it but she deserves a lot more. |
Beentoolong
New member
Username: Beentoolong
Post Number: 3
Registered: 03-2007
| | Posted on Thursday, May 17, 2007 - 11:05 am: |
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Thanks for the feedback! I didn't think she could handle anymore than 20, being her first time and all! (hell..I don't think I could handle any more than 20 in the rain w/a belt!) Wouldn't want to scare her away from it and lose her forever! I have a feeling Mickey will be getting all she deserves in the future! |
Tammynx
Moderator/Spanking Aficionado
Username: Tammynx
Post Number: 2040
Registered: 10-2005
| | Posted on Thursday, May 17, 2007 - 11:16 am: |
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That was GREAT!! Please write more!!
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Weasel
Spanko
Username: Weasel
Post Number: 297
Registered: 06-2006
| | Posted on Thursday, May 17, 2007 - 11:21 am: |
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20... that's just enough to get mickey hooked. Great story line!
Some day you'll spank me... er thank me for this!
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Buenaventura
Advanced Spanko
Username: Buenaventura
Post Number: 645
Registered: 04-2006
| | Posted on Thursday, May 17, 2007 - 04:58 pm: |
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Yeah there all you sensual spankees go.For 2000 dollars I don,t think I,d be thinking about sex.Just punishment.But like I said good story!! |
Beentoolong
New member
Username: Beentoolong
Post Number: 5
Registered: 03-2007
| | Posted on Thursday, May 17, 2007 - 05:48 pm: |
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I don't think I could ever seperate the 2! Thanks again, not much of a writer. Took most of it from real life, the ending is how I would have liked it handled!  |
Badgirl
Spanko
Username: Badgirl
Post Number: 349
Registered: 11-2005
| | Posted on Friday, May 18, 2007 - 03:51 pm: |
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 Great story!!! I can't wait for the next edition.  |
Tammynx
Moderator/Spanking Aficionado
Username: Tammynx
Post Number: 2057
Registered: 10-2005
| | Posted on Friday, May 18, 2007 - 03:59 pm: |
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Buena I'm sure thats how my husband would have felt too.
He would have handled it the same way too but way more then 20!! |
Lilsoresub
New member
Username: Lilsoresub
Post Number: 2
Registered: 05-2007
| | Posted on Saturday, May 19, 2007 - 08:57 am: |
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Great story can't wait for the new chapter. However for $2000 spent compulsively without consent the 20 lashes would be just the beginning a lot of work to payback the debt would be in order. I'd have to work extra for a month (hard labor). However the fun of spending the $2000 and receiving a good 20 lashes it just may be worth it.  |
Cheekychipmunk
Spanko
Username: Cheekychipmunk
Post Number: 261
Registered: 05-2006
| | Posted on Sunday, August 19, 2007 - 12:41 am: |
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Great Story. Can't wait for more.
"Success in almost any field depends more on energy and drive than it does on intelligence."
Sloan Wilson
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