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Hardwood
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Username: Hardwood
Post Number: 25
Registered: 09-2005
| | Posted on Saturday, March 31, 2007 - 09:57 pm: | 
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Standing, enfolded
blinking back tears
what must be done must be done
embracing arms give strength
holding
Face down
nothing between bottom and hand
layer after layer of moisturizing lotion
sensitizing the skin; apologies begin
preparing
Facing the walls of the house
joined together
as they are joined together
seeing the conjunction
of house and life
atonement beginning
waiting
Face down, bottom right up
leg joins leg, together
naked body touching naked lap
strong hands hold firmly
no escape for anyone
compelled by necessity
quivering
Deeds done, and left undone
recited, and by the penitent, repeated
defaults acknowledged
punishment accepted
scolding
Hurt, then delay
anticipation of pain not yet fulfilled
knowing what lies ahead, inevitably
warming
Pain, blossoming
heat, as if on fire
limits approached
and crossed
gasping
Reddened skin
layer after layer
turning white
blood rushing in, underneath
legs kicking frantically
pain increasing
dancing
Apologies, promises
tears no longer held back
deterrence not yet certain
continuing
Frantic squirming
heartfelt pleading
true repentance
unbearable ordeal
crying
Deeds done, and left undone
again recited,
most sincerely repeated
legs still kicking
defaults acknowledged
punishment accepted
gratitude expressed
submitting
Held firmly
touching, body to lap,
hands gently caress
but permit no escape
not yet knowing if it is over
quivering
Staring, once again
naught to be seen
except wall meeting wall
joined floor to ceiling
thinking only of two people
joined from head to foot
hand to hand, hip to hip
atoning
Face down
nothing between bottom and hand
layer after layer of moisturizing lotion
soothing the skin; apologies repeated
comforting
Standing, enfolded
blinking back tears
what must be done has been done
arms embracing, giving strength
forgiving. |
Tammynx
Moderator/Spanking Aficionado
Username: Tammynx
Post Number: 1812
Registered: 10-2005
| | Posted on Monday, April 02, 2007 - 10:42 am: |
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That was GREAT Hardwood!!!
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Naughtythoughts
New member
Username: Naughtythoughts
Post Number: 13
Registered: 01-2008
| | Posted on Saturday, March 01, 2008 - 09:54 pm: |
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Excellent poem!!!! You write wonderfully!!!! |
Artfeline
New member
Username: Artfeline
Post Number: 5
Registered: 02-2008
| | Posted on Saturday, March 01, 2008 - 11:50 pm: |
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Love the imagery of the corner before and after.
Thanks, Hardwood. |
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