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Darwins
New member Username: Darwins
Post Number: 4 Registered: 04-2005
| Posted on Saturday, April 30, 2005 - 08:22 pm: |
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This is a carry over from my "breaking spanking" comments. I hope you like it. The Rage glowed like a golden ball Tear everything to pieces and rip them up small Clench fists and screw eyes tight shut Paste over the wound and ignore the cut Feet struggling to grip, sliding in sand Help me please just lend me a hand, Nothing, so build it higher and wider, hold it all in Just add another layer and make it a thicker skin. Let me laugh but please let me cry, oh God this isn’t me The sunny face, not the mess inside I don’t want you to see, Help me please, just lend me a hand I can see in your eyes that you understand. Do what you can, or please, just do what you must With no malice or thoughts unkind I give you my trust, Please break down these walls and end this strife Please break down these walls and give me back my life My brain is on fire so intense is the pain Eyes blur, oh God, again and again and again My eyes are so wet I can’t even see It’s cracking, it’s breaking, jeeeessssuuuus! I’m free. I’m broken, I’m dying, it’s all falling out There’s nothing left I’m empty nothing to doubt You’re a pal, you’re a friend, I know it cost you dear heart But thank you, oh thank you, for doing your part. Your arms are tight round me please don’t let me go Don’t let me return yet to the world that I know I’m floating so gently so gently at peace Thank you my friend for that glorious release |
Plezurscry
New member Username: Plezurscry
Post Number: 3 Registered: 04-2005
| Posted on Saturday, April 30, 2005 - 09:56 pm: |
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That was beautiful. Thanks for sharing. |
Bethie
Moderator/Spanking Aficionado Username: Bethie
Post Number: 73 Registered: 04-2005
| Posted on Saturday, April 30, 2005 - 11:03 pm: |
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Thank you for sharing this! It's lovely. |
Wolfie
Moderator/Spanking Aficionado Username: Wolfie
Post Number: 24 Registered: 04-2005
| Posted on Saturday, April 30, 2005 - 11:11 pm: |
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Beautifully written my love, evocative and heart felt. Thank you for sharing this part of yourself with us. |
Kendra
New member Username: Kendra
Post Number: 21 Registered: 04-2005
| Posted on Sunday, May 01, 2005 - 07:02 am: |
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Holy cow that's amazing. Emotions are a very strong thing, and sometimes we let them control us. Or hold them in too long and eventually explode. I once thought of my emotions as a sink. If you kept filling this sink with emotions and don't drain it it'll overflow, spilling into the world around you. Emotions are the same way. If you hold them in long enough and keep adding to them you will eventually overflow. |
Naughtybynature
New member Username: Naughtybynature
Post Number: 11 Registered: 04-2005
| Posted on Sunday, May 01, 2005 - 02:11 pm: |
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Simply lovely. Did is a word of achievement, Won't is a word of retreat, Might is a word of bereavement, Can't is a word of defeat, Ought is a word of duty, Try is a word of each hour, Will is a word of beauty, Can is a word of power. *(Unknown Author) Don't take life so seriously.....it isn't permanent
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