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Master60s_pet
New member Username: Master60s_pet
Post Number: 35 Registered: 10-2005
| Posted on Saturday, October 22, 2005 - 03:08 pm: |
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A knife cuts, deep into my soul, of a pain, I can't let go. A pain so deep, betrayal of vows spoken, your to blind to see, My heart is broken. Blindly you cut, time after time, pain not done justice, by a simple rhyme. How many times will my friends pick me up, till on this marriage, I finally give up? Are you so blind? do you not see ? do you even care? what you have done to me? It don't go away, with a simple I am sorry, are you so dense, you don't even worry. How many more tears, am I suppose to cry? how many more times do I have to wish to die? Wake up!!!! this may be your last chance, Though I may be here in body, I have forgotton the dance. MASTER60{master60's_pet} I am a blessed brat..I am well loved and taken care of.
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Babyj4
Supreme Spanko Username: Babyj4
Post Number: 1473 Registered: 09-2005

| Posted on Sunday, October 23, 2005 - 01:30 pm: |
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I love this poem, you did a wonderful job! Babyj- worlds cutest little brat!
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Tmichellebrat
New member Username: Tmichellebrat
Post Number: 16 Registered: 10-2005

| Posted on Monday, October 24, 2005 - 12:11 pm: |
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Yes this poem is a good one. Good Job! |
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