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Username: Hisredwagon
Post Number: 8
Registered: 02-2006
| | Posted on Sunday, April 23, 2006 - 10:03 am: | 
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Hi everyone, I have dived in and have written a short story. It has been many years since I have written, so please bear with me. Please feel free to comment. I value feed back.
The Picnic part one
It was a beautiful morning, the sun was shining and the birds were signing. They were going to take a picnic lunch to the beach. She wanted to make sure everything was just perfect. She was making his favorite lunch, little sandwich squares cut with care.
Tom had gone out for a walk this morning; while he was gone she was anxiously waiting his return. Angela changed her clothes a few times wondering what outfit to wear and if it would please him. She had put her hair up but then decided to let her blonde hair blow with the wind; she thought that would be more playful. She was feeling feisty today and wanted to play.
Tom returned from his walk and went to see where Angela was. He found her in the bathroom applying red lipstick. He wanted to kiss those lips but he needed to deal with her skirt first. “Angela, I want you to go change your skirt. Go put on your white cotton skirt” He demands of her. “I do not want to wear white Tom, it will get too dirty at the beach” she tells him with a pout. He just gave her his look, she knows that look quite well. With that she decided to change unless she wants a view of the floor and then the wall.
Walking into the bedroom to change Angela is feeling hurt that Tom did not like what she had put on for him. The skirt she had chosen seemed appropriate for the beach. It was one of his favorites, the skirt was loose and free flowing. The paisley design in pink and teal accented her figure. The pink camisole top went beautifully with it.
As she stood there thinking about Tom’s choice of skirt, she was reflecting on the first time she had worn it. It was carefully chosen for him. This was going to be the first time they had met. She had flown a long way to meet him and knew that he had plans to punish her.
They had met on the internet a year earlier and as the year progressed they became very close to one another. Tom had become extremely upset with her one morning when she confessed to him her behavior the night before.
She took her girl fiend to get a tattoo, after the tattoo they were supposed to pick up groceries. Instead they ended up in a bar drinking all night.
That night they had met a few men and played hard. Angela can still remember her behavior that night, at least parts of the night anyway. It was a night she wished never happened. It was surreal what happened that night.
They had entered the restaurant/bar and decided to sit at the bar instead of the booth. That was her first mistake she decided. As they ordered their lunch and drinks, some guy came over and introduced himself to her girlfriend. Creepy guy she thinks reliving the experience. They had tried to ignore him but he was persistent in getting Audrey’s phone number. So they gave him a fake number thinking he would leave them alone. They did not expect him to call that number and figure out they had tricked him. When Ernie came back over to them he decided to start talking to Angela, now he wanted her number. Angela did not want to hand out her phone number to him by any means; this guy gave her goose bumps. Right about then a new guy enters the scene and introduces himself to Audrey and Angela. His name was Drew, very handsome man. He had eyes for Audrey, they instantly hit it off. Ernie seeing that Angela’s friend is now occupied by Drew decides to resume his attack on Angela. Drew and Ernie knew each other as they both frequent this bar. Angela needed to go outside and get some fresh air, this guy was creeping her out. That was her second mistake she recalls. She no sooner gets outside when Ernie follows her out. Sitting outside on the stone bench, Angela cringes when Ernie sat next to her. Audrey had noticed that Ernie had followed Angela outside so she thought in her friend’s best interest she should go out and help Angela. Just as Audrey steps outside she sees Ernie grab Angela and try to kiss her. As Angela tried to pull back, he grabs her harder so she can’t escape. Drew walked out and told Ernie to leave the girls alone, the girls were now with him.
Angela was so mad at herself for not handling the situation better. It took a stranger to help her. Times like that Angela freezes up and can’t figure out what to do, as she never likes to offend any man. Now she wishes that she smacked him across the face for violating her. Back inside they met this couple who just walked in. Great people Angela thinks, nice people to go out and party with. She hit it off instantly with the wife. As they sat there talking another man joins the group. Everybody knows each other here, this is a friendly bar Angela thinks. Angela can’t remember the new guys name by that point she had to many cocktails. She can remember that he is from Tahiti and that he smells incredibly sexy. She spent plenty of time talking with this man, why can’t I remember his name she thinks.
The next morning Angela wakes up and finds herself in suite at the Hilton. Completely naked and wondering where her clothes could be and how she got there.
Holding her head, sitting on the couch she tries to remember the events of the night before. She is not thinking straight at this point she really can not remember anything. Looking across the room she sees her stocking under the table. She crosses the room to pick it up and notices it is ripped. She shudders thinking, ripping her stocking is an irresponsible act. She knows that her friend she chats with will not like it that she tore her stocking.
Looking around the room she wonders where the other one could be. She found it in the bathroom and wonders why they were in two separate rooms. Giving up on trying to remember she decides to watch CNN and wait for her friend to wake. As Angela was watching CNN they broke in to brief the viewers that a cyclone just hit Australia. With the mention of Australia, Angela shudders, thinking about her friend there. She knows he is safe the cyclone is up north that is not what scares her. Thinking about her naughty behavior the night before scares her, knowing that he will be displeased with her. She knows that the next time they chat he will ask her if she has been behaving, he always does. She sat there contemplating whether or not to tell him about what happened. Knowing that she has a lot of respect for him, she decides that she will not tell him unless he asks if she was behaving. She did not want to lie to him by any means. She would just have to deal with it when the time came to tell him.
“Angela, are you ready yet? What is taking you so long to change your skirt?”
“I will be right out Tom, I needed to use the bathroom.”
Walking out of the bathroom, Angela wonders what Tom has planned for her today. He usually never requests her to wear this skirt. He knows it reminds her of that night when he first punished her, for the behavior of the naughty night out. She hopes that she is not in trouble today, she wanted everything to be perfect. Tom has been working a lot lately and they have had very little time together. |
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Great beginning! Now we're waiting for the next part...what is it about that skirt? Hmmmm?